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    If you could change on important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.


    I was born in a big city, Bangkok and I always wish to have subway all around Bangkok. I am sure that it will help enhance quality of life of Bangkok people in many aspect. And It will help the Nation to reduce the use of fuel oil during the raising of oil price situation.

    Thailand has subway in Bangkok but the coverage of them are not much. I’d be great if there is more coverage of subway. It is suitable for Bangkok because there is a traffic congestion. Since the subway is not on the ground, so it don’t have to encounter with many cars on the ground. In this results , Using subway is very fast, predictable and convenience. For myself I go to work by driving a car because around my house there is no subway station. And other choices of transportations are not my preference. For example, I cannot predict what time the bus will come? Sometimes I had to wait for almost an hour to wait a bus and once it came, the bus was crowded with people.

    If there is subway coverage in Bangkok, people will be more relax and have more time left for their family. I found one research told that more than 50% of Bangkok people have stress out and have less conversation with family because there is no time for family. This happen to my family as well, in the morning I have to get out from home by 6AM and in the afternoon I used more than 2 hours in the road and come home about 8PM with tired. I almost have no time to speak to everyone. I would prefer to change my routine and have more time with my family. I believe that subway will help me a lot on this.

    Besides of that reasons, the subway helps to reduce cost of living. While the oil price is getting higher, to use public transportation will help a lot to decrease the transportation cost. In the past, when I drive a car to my office, I use only 100 Baht but for now the cost of fuel price is getting expensive , I use 200 Baht. That’s mean the price is getting in double.

    If someone can give me one wish, there is nothing that I will ask except the subway coverage. Once there are more subway, I am sure that my dream will come true, my quality of life will be better and my money in my pocket will increase definitely.


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    จากคุณ : The phu - [ 5 ก.พ. 49 22:18:00 ]

 
 


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