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Hi Hariomepa-lung
Good story krab, I bet you've hit Khun Gay-ya's nerve now...hehehe. It's my first time to post comments on here and hope this story will be a big hitz na krab !!!....
well, to be honest with you, I actually know not much about Khun Gay-ya and P' Nath. Only know that both of them have been flirting on the broad for ages...and it's quite work...(at least people in Pantip like it..hehe)
I'm not quite good at writing, but I think I'm a good reader one.. So what I can say now is....you're doing quite good about the location as you seem to know the places quite well. Above of all, you also use the right narrative and scene expression that makes pple want to follow the story....
Hope to read a nice writing like this soon na krab !...
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Theo
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