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    เอา Email ที่จะลองส่งไปแนะนำตัวกับ Professor มาให้ช่วยแก้ไขครับ

    พอดีอาจารย์ที่คณะให้ลองเขียนอีเมล์ไปแนะนำตัวในเบื้องต้น กับ professor ที่ lab ที่สนใจน่ะครับ ก็เลยได้อีเมล์ฉบับนี้ออกมา กะว่าจะเขียนไปหลายๆ ที่ แล้วให้อันนี้เป็น prototype ครับ แล้วจะเปลี่ยนแปลงรายละเอียดเหตุผลของการเลือกแต่ละที่ ในแต่ละฉบับที่จะส่งไป ถ้าเกิดว่า response กลับมาแล้วดู promising ก็จะส่ง full statement ไปพร้อม admission อีกทีน่ะครับ

    รู้สึกว่าเขียนไม่ค่อยออกครับ ไม่รู้จะเชิดชูตัวเองยังไงให้ impressive น่ะครับ อยากให้ช่วยแนะนำแก้ไข หรือออกไอเดียเพิ่มเติมให้นิดนึงครับ ความคิดผมตันแล้วจริงๆ ครับ

    To whom it may concern,

    My name is .............. I am currently working as a member of the faculty, at the Division of Bacteriology, Department of Microbiology, Faculty of Medicine, ....................University. As a new staff member, I am required to pursue a PhD in microbiology. The tuition fee and other expenses will be supported by a scholarship provided by the Faculty. The purpose of this statement is to inform you that I am deeply interested in your graduate program and hoping to be able to participate in your laboratory, and also to give you a quick introduction regarding myself, my long term goal and my determination towards research and teaching.

    I graduated with first degree honor from the Faculty of Medicine, ............... University in 2006. During my medical school years I have always had my concern in infectious diseases. However, I eventually discovered that my true passion was not entirely on the clinical aspect. It was indeed research that fascinates me the most. I can truly felt the importance of this particular kind of work and the beneficial contribution that it brought towards medicine, and I was willing to devote my entire self into it. Since teaching has always been a career I want to pursue, I gratefully took the precious opportunity to become a full-time faculty member for my medical school.

    My main interest is currently set upon enteric pathogens, since they are still of substantial importance and have tremendous impact among the well-being of Thai citizens. A better understanding of their intricate interactions towards hosts as well as the molecular aspects of their pathogenesis would generously provide us the information needed in any future contribution of ground-breaking diagnostic, curative and preventive strategies.

    I am certain that I am capable of handling and conducting researches. As a scientist, I truly believe in the dignity and virtue of researching. And as a medical doctor, I am convinced that my previous clinical experience would be of great benefit towards my future research. From my experience as a medical student, I am acquainted with the methodology of research and have had considerable hands-on experience with common equipments and procedures used in laboratories.

    Teaching has always been a profession that I immensely admire, as well as researching. So after completing my PhD, I plan to return to Chulalongkorn University to be a faculty member, and also to continue my research in enteric pathogens. I will be responsible for students in the graduate program and medical students in their pre-clinical education.

    I will be sponsored by a scholarship provided by the Faculty of Medicine, ........... University throughout my study. I have also taken the CBT TOEFL test with the score of ...... and I am currently preparing for the GRE which I am taking in mid-July. After I have both the exam scores and the required recommendations ready I will apply for your department’s graduate program through the admission office, and I certainly hope that you would kindly consider me to be one of your graduate students in your laboratory. I am confident that my future contribution will be promisingly beneficial towards your research works and indeed, the medical world.


    Sincerely yours,

    .................., MD.
    Division of Bacteriology, Department of Microbiology
    Faculty of Medicine, ....................University

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    จากคุณ : ruiN - [ 5 มิ.ย. 49 19:29:47 ]

 
 


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