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i think that's it krub. i should hv used "transition words" rather than "tips"....sorry about that krub...
anyway, here're some tips krub!
1. one good way writing an attractive introduction is using quatation krub.
For example, "Money is nothing" is what my mom has always been telling me. ___. ___. I would prefer being healthy to being wealthy..........
2. when giving any example, pls make it specific, not superficial.......not just "one of my friends"....but "my Thai friend at xxx school", for example.
3. to avoid using it so frequently, the word "for example" or "for instance" can be replaced by "as a case in point".....(if u hv > 1 example in the SAME point, u can use "as another case in point" for the 2nd one krub)
Eng is my 2nd language, so i'm not a writing expert. Once again, pls use yr own judgement picking up things given. Practicing is the only surefire way to succeed krub.
ps: sorry if any mistake or typo!
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