ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. จากคุณ : K-phone - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 12:32:28 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 2 Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 13:35:55 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 3 What should be next... Ah ha... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. It was a talkative and clever rabbit. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- จากคุณ : Flowery - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 13:48:36 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 4 Hello K-phone. Nice to meet you. Hi! Flowery. It's nice to see you again here. Thank you for joinning. ============================================= Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. It was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. ============================================= จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 14:02:22 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 5 It is interesting game, may I join in this game? ================================= Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. It was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. จากคุณ : นะหนิง - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 16:15:55 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 6 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. It was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning,........... จากคุณ : K-phone - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 16:55:36 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 7 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. It was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning,he sat alone in his little house. จากคุณ : นะหนิง - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 18:04:09 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 8 May I change "It was a talkative and clever rabbit." to "He was a talkative and clever rabbit."? I think the story will be smoother. Thank you. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- จากคุณ : Flowery - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 19:47:29 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 9 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was/were............................ แก้ไขเมื่อ 28 มี.ค. 51 21:02:55 จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 20:28:00 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 10 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. แก้ไขเมื่อ 28 มี.ค. 51 20:51:26 จากคุณ : Chermi - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 20:50:30 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 11 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. จากคุณ : นิยามของคำว่ารัก - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 21:30:55 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 12 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. Jimmy was in a panic. จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 21:44:11 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 13 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. Jimmy was in a panic. Luckily, he realized his vanishing spell. จากคุณ : นะหนิง - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 21:56:26 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 14 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. Jimmy was in a panic. Luckily, he realized his vanishing spell. Jimmy said "Evanesco!" จากคุณ : Flowery - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 22:36:29 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 15 " no one see me" he said. จากคุณ : คนคอยฝัน - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 22:42:38 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 16 ฺีUnfortunately, the snake can see him because... จากคุณ : BzzzzY - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 22:51:03 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 17 haha... it's still alive, huh? -- Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. Jimmy was in a panic. Luckily, he realized his vanishing spell. Jimmy said "Evanesco!" " no one see me" he said. Unfortunately, the snake can see him because... "Holly cow I forgot my red belt!", screamed loudly little Jimmy. จากคุณ : thaispicy - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 23:17:50 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 18 Now I'm quit confused. Jimmy was already eaten, wasn't he? and Who actually vanished for the spell, Jimmy or the Snake? 5555    That's OK, though. And I suggest not to keep repeating the former sentences. That would be easier to read continously. ================================================= He rushed to his bedroom with that cruel snake chasing him. แก้ไขเมื่อ 28 มี.ค. 51 23:31:09 แก้ไขเมื่อ 28 มี.ค. 51 23:28:38 จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 28 มี.ค. 51 23:23:54 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 19 "STOP!" he shouted when his back crashed into the wall as the snake was creeping upward to him, immediately. ----------- anyone can changed this sentence if it wrong grammar because i think it seem freak a little bit  - -"... i'll try to join again. แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 00:14:14 จากคุณ : Jikkyjang - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 00:13:15 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 20 Once upon a time, there was a white rabbit named Jimmy who lived in a forest ar far away. Jimmy was not an ordinary rabbit. He was a talkative and clever rabbit. Besides, he had a little magic in his word. He always spell his magic when he was in danger. One fine Sunday morning, he sat alone in his little house. He thought of his friends. He was thinking "Um.... Sammy the squirrel, Bobby the bird, Winny the....", suddenly there was a huge snake that was slowly coming into his house. It ate him alive. Jimmy was in a panic. Luckily, he realized his vanishing spell. Jimmy said "Evanesco!" " no one see me" he said. Unfortunately, the snake can see him because... "Holly cow I forgot my red belt!", screamed loudly little  trouble. He rushed to his bedroom with that cruel snake chasing him. "STOP!" he shouted when his back crashed into the wall as the snake was creeping upward to him, immediately. "No worry my friends!! I need 5min for handle in the trouble"  Jimmy said The snake gaze upon Jimmy. " Oh Jimmy!! noone have good fortune in all the time" "What you said !!?" "Why not!? Um... a little kid, from my feeling who're weak should to die." At once noone said something. The red eye of snake looking Jimmy. "Um... I'm sorry at I don't introduce in myself, I'm Abaddon! And I come to remind you all just only. The story of vileness come to began." ======================================================= It's hard for me. But I try to join. Please kindly rectify if I do something wrong. แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 13:24:28 แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 09:58:24 แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 09:39:32 จากคุณ : hamanda - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 09:02:31 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 21 It's really nice I see all of you are joining my game. I know that some people are quite afraid of joining as they're afraid of mistake. All I say is Don't worry. The purpose of this game is to practice writing skill. If you made any mistake, it doesn't matter at all. I also made loads of mistake. Everyone can make a mistake. So please don't worry. Hamanda, you did a good job ka. However, you broke my little rules, 1 sentence at a time.  The purpose of this rule is nobody know where the story goes so nobody can control it alone. It would be a little exciting what the next person will write down. So this game needs quite a number of people. However as I say, It doesn't matter if you make a mistake. Just come in again and keep playing. You'll have some fun. แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 10:33:29 จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 10:32:52 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 22 i'm sorry! haha+ now oic send just one clause. i will play in rule. Thanks you so much, I'm fun at play your game. ========================================== After speaking voice of Abaddon be end, Jimmy looking Abaddon creeping outside. จากคุณ : hamanda - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 10:50:15 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 23 He was wondering about Abaddon's speech, "The story of vileness come to began." จากคุณ : Flowery - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 14:33:09 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 24 Jimmy tried to figure it out but not successful, so he left it and came to think of his friend again. แก้ไขเมื่อ 29 มี.ค. 51 22:17:59 จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 22:17:23 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 25 Sammy the squirrel was his dearest friend so he decided to visit Sammy. จากคุณ : Flowery - [ 29 มี.ค. 51 23:05:50 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 26 When he arrived Sammy's home, he didn't meet his friend. จากคุณ : ngbobber - [ 30 มี.ค. 51 01:40:23 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 27 "Where on earth is he now?" murmured Jimmy, knocking the door for the fifth time. จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 30 มี.ค. 51 20:26:34 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 28 nobody in that house, a little voice of butterfly. จากคุณ : ngbobber - [ 3 เม.ย. 51 00:04:20 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 29 The snake's words crushed his thought again, Jimmy frightfully  hurried to another friend, Bobby the bird. แก้ไขเมื่อ 03 เม.ย. 51 08:45:30 จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 3 เม.ย. 51 08:42:38 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 30 กะว่าจะแตกประเด็น แต่ก็ทำพลาดอีกจนได้ กลายเป็นตั้งกระทู้ใหม่ไปซะ แหะ ๆ มือใหม่ก็อย่างนี้แหละค่ะ (ใหม่มานานแล้ว ไม่ยอมเก่าซะที 555) ไปเล่นต่อกันนะคะ ที่นี่เลยค่ะ http://www.pantip.com/cafe/library/topic/K6498102/K6498102.html จากคุณ : ตั้งสติก่อนสตาร์ท - [ 8 เม.ย. 51 17:42:25 ]