In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Nowadays, people can extend their life to live longer. From my experience and observation I think that medical advancement, exercise and supplementary food are the key factors to stretch peoples age for several reasons which I will mention below.
First, medical advancement bring many benefits to our life. For instance, with the help of the teleconference from Americans doctors, the twins in Thailand were safe from the operation. To develop in medical, patients can recover rapidly, have less pain and better functioning after treating from doctors. Moreover, researchers and doctors have been found medicines to cure and prevent sufferer from diseases, whereas in the former era, people died dramatically from cholera because the medicine had not found and the technology had not developed yet.
Secondly, exercise can make people strong. Not only will body be strong, their mind also enriches. When people finish the exercise, Adrenalin will come out and make them happy. Exercise can do all walks of life with their interest. Children always run and ride a bicycle with friends. Teenagers prefer to play the challenge ones such as playing a skateboard. Adult not only doing exercise for their health, but also for social relationship. For instance, tradesmen do business deal with their clients while playing golf.
Lastly, the technology of food and drug has been improved and developed which is provided the supplementary food to people. To ease people to get more nutrients so multi vitamin can find only in one capsule. Because of the rush period, supplementary food can help people to complete their need in nutrition.
Undoubtable, from supporting of the three factors above, So I predict that people in the 21th century and so on can increase their chance to live longer because of the development in medical, people can recover faster. The more exercise, the more people live longer and supplementary food can support their need about food.
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