ความคิดเห็นที่ 3
Today is a great day too, because today I went to the temple on the hill. (okay)
Today was a great day too because I went to the temple on the hill. (ถ้ากิจกรรมของวันเสร็จแล้ว ใช้ was ก็ได้ และออก today ที่สองได้)
It was a very distance.
It was very distant.
I went to the temple with my classmates and a teacher. (okay)
I went there with my classmates and a teacher. (ทำสั้นกว่าโดยใช้ there ก็ได้)
I brought food to monk with my friends.
My friends and I brought food to the monks.
I was so a very happy.
I was so very happy.
And then we went to the hill and we saw view point.
And then we went up the hill to the view point.
Then we went up the hill to see the view. (ใช้ก็ได้)
It was a very beautifully.
It was very beautiful.
In the afternoon, I went to JuntPar meeting room and played yoga.
In the afternoon, I went to the JuntPar meeting room and practiced yoga.
In the afternoon, I went to the JuntPar meeting room and did yoga. (ใช้ did เป็นภาษาธรรมชาติก็ได้)
There are many students in the meeting room and I enjoyed with practice yoga.
There were many students in the meeting room and I enjoyed practicing yoga.
It was be fresh and also has concentration.
It was refreshing and also helped my concentration.
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1. Today was a great day too because I went to the temple on the hill.
2. It was very distant.
3. I went there with my classmates and a teacher.
4. My friends and I brought food to the monks.
5. I was so very happy.
6. Then we went up the hill to the view point.
7. It was very beautiful.
8. In the afternoon I went to the JuntPar meeting room and practiced yoga.
9. There were many students in the meeting room and I enjoyed it.
10. It was refreshing and also helped my concentration.
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Today was a great day too because I went to the distant temple on the hill. (รวม 1&2 ก็ได้)
I went there with my classmate friends and a teacher and we all brought food to the monks. (รวม 3&4 ก็ได้)
I was so very happy.
Then we went up the hill to the view point which was very beautiful. (รวม 6&7 ก็ได้)
In the afternoon, I went to the JuntPar meeting room and practiced yoga.
There were many students in the meeting room, and I enjoyed it because it was refreshing and also helped my concentration. . (รวม 9&10 ก็ได้)
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แล้วมี 6 ประโยค
Today was a great day too because I went to the distant temple on the hill. I went there with my classmate friends and a teacher and we all brought food to the monks. I was so very happy. Then we went up the hill to the view point which was very beautiful. In the afternoon, I went to the JuntPar meeting room and practiced yoga. There were many students in the meeting room, and I enjoyed it because it was refreshing and also helped my concentration.
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รวมเป็น 4 ประโยคก็ได้
Today was a great day too because I went to the distant temple on the hill with my classmate friends and a teacher. We all brought food to the monks there, which made me so happy. After that, we went up the hill to the view point which was very beautiful. In the afternoon, I went to the JuntPar meeting room where there were many other students, and we practiced yoga, which I enjoyed because it was refreshing and also helped my concentration.
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