ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 ผมขอแก้ไขอันข้างบนนะครับ ลองมาตรวจดูอีกทีแล้วครับ คิดว่าน่าจะถูกต้องกว่าข้างบนครับ ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Mr. Codman, I was very interested to see your advertisement for a Secretary in the Nation, and would like to be considered for this position. As you will see from the completed resume, I was trained by BBC and had references their certificate in Secretarial Studies (tree yeas, full-time). Since then I have gained my graduate at Sophia Sky Travel – in particular as a secretary to the manager. I would very much welcome the new opportunity that working for a large company such as yours would bring. I can supply qualifications if you need them, and can arrange for an interview any time convenient to you, but would need to have information beforehand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully A.Arun-oasd (Mr. Waushara Run-ons) ----------------------------------------------------------------------- ใครว่าง ๆ ช่วยลองตรวจให้ทีละอันก่อนก็ได้ครับ ----------------------------------------------------------------------- มีอีกอันหนึงครับ ตัวเลือกครับ apply , available , been , convenient , graduated , experience , for , of age , position , qualifications , sincerely , vacancy ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir, I have just graduated your advertisement for a Bank teller in the Australian’s Times and wish to vacancy for this post. I apply with a bachelor’s degree in Banking from the University of New South Wales last year. I am twenty-two years of age and since leaving the university I have been working as a bank clerk a private bank. If you think you have any position for me, could you please let me know. I am available for an interview any time at your convenient I look forward to hearing from your soon. Very sincerely yours, P.Hill (Ms. Paula Hill) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- ใครว่าง ๆ ก็ช่วยตรวจดูให้หน่อยนะครับ ทำสุดฝีมือแล้วครับ --------------------------------------------------------------------- จากคุณ : Jumboy - [ 11 ส.ค. 51 21:35:43 A:117.47.228.200 X: ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 2 Here is an idea for writing a cover letter. Please consider the correct form as the letter below. Suitable Indents are required for a good letter, too. Goodluck :) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- K' Jumboy's Address Ph.  ....... 12 August 2008 Mr.....Codman Mr Codman's title The company's address Dear Mr Codman, I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position of Secreatary advertised in the Nation, Friday August 8. My extensive experience and skills in the news and media industry have been gained over ... years in a variety of positions in Thailand and oversea. I was (or have been) most recently employed as .... (position) of ......(company). I was responsible for ........ (should relate to the position you are applying) I am particularly interested in developing my expertise in the ..... area and would welcome the opportunity to be involved in a company as yours. I am reliable, hardworking, and....(should relate to the quality that the position required) A resume giving details of my qualifications and experience is attached. Please contact me at anytime convenient to you on the above number to arrange an interview. Yours sincerely, JUMBOY Encl. จากคุณ : พราว..พิสุทธิ์ - [ วันแม่แห่งชาติ 10:07:32 ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 3 Dear Mr Codman, I am replying to your recent advertisement for a secretarial position posted in the Nation newspaper.  As the table below would indicate, my qualifications fit quite well to your job descriptions. Your requirements                                     My qualifications ------------------------                                 ------------------------- Graduated with a secretarial degree      graduated from BBC secretarial school minimum x years of secretarial experience     x years experience at Sophia Sky Travel ----bla bla bla---------                         ------- bla bla bla  --------- I am an energetic person who pays great attention to details and provides quality work as you would expect from a professional-grade secretary.  I am quite flexible on work schedule and I am willing to travel on business trips when required.  I am a team player, who has good altitude and pleasant personality toward coworkers.  I am positive that I can contribute to your organization goals and significantly reduce the workload of my superior at minimal supervision. I would very much welcome an opportunity for an interview at your conveniences.  If you need further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.  I am looking forward to your positive response and hope to have an opportunity to be a part of your corporate success. แก้ไขเมื่อ 13 ส.ค. 51 03:06:01 จากคุณ : Tisco fan - [ 13 ส.ค. 51 03:04:46 ]