I am going to take a toefl this month.
Please give me useful recommendation.

Thanks in advance,

TOPIC
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where
should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. _________________________________
Personally, I suggest that visitors should spend their time at Siam square, Bangkok. This is because this place offers tourists a city’s museum, the best shopping mall, and many traditional restaurants. Visitor would never disappoint when they go there.

Firstly, to study a long period of Thailand’s capital history, visitors have to visit the Bangkok museum, the newest museum in Bangkok. When they go to the museum, they could receive knowledge that Thailand is the one of countries that has the longest history in Asia. Moreover, they would be excited about beautiful cultures. With this place, visitors will never forget Thailand when they come to their countries.

Secondly, to eat Thai food, one of the best foods in the world, visitors must go to Siam square. There are several restaurants located at the square that provide tourists very good tastes of foods of Thai cuisines. They could eat Tom Yum Kung, a well-known soup and other Thai desserts made by original cooks. No doubt, visitors would enjoy eating Thai food and buy it when they come back to their homes.

Thirdly, to shop at one of the most luxury shopping centers in the world, visitors should visit Siam square. Globally, Siam paragon, Siam center, Siam discovery, and Central world are the most favorite destinations for shoppers. Those places offer tourists a lot of well-known brand name goods and high quality of Thai commodities. So, I recommend that Travelers should not forget to shop at those places when they visit Bangkok.

Having considered in reasons, I still hold on my position that if visitors have only one day to spend in my country, they should visit Siam square. I believe that visitors will extremely pleasure at Siam square and will never forger to tell their friends or families to come to Siam square.

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