The story was good descriptive to be understand. Its wonderful story for kinds. The story is short but Ellena can construct story fantastically. It suitable to tell it with children before goes to bed. Ellena sets up the problem, the children can set out to solve it. Everyone was satisfied with the solution.
Ellena can construct the story to be the legend of some village. The children in the story can be symbolic of people worldwide. They should create some activity to solve problem of our world.
The children will like it because they wish to be the heroes to solve every problem as this story construct it. Its funny for the grown up but there is some problem was exist after reading such as: What is the village called? / Did the water come from underground?
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