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    Topic:-
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

    Essay:-
    I do agree with this statement.  In my view, public media pay too much attention to famous people.  It makes those people have uncomfortable and inconvenient living.  Moreover, the informative programs will be less important and its airtime may be reduced.  This will lead negative value to our social especially young age as well.

    To begin with, when any person is to be well-known, he or she will have less privacy. It is because their story will be interested by public.  Surely, it has much value and many paparazzi will try to find any private story of them for publishing.  It will lead to inconvenient and uncomfortable living of them.  They have to be more careful when doing anything.  Plus, as you have seen in news, there was a shocked accident occurred with Lady Diana because a paparazzo tried following her. Conversely, if the media take less priority for this kind of program, there will be less degree of people's interest to their famous person and paparazzi will take less effort as well.

    Next, because story of famous people is popular, there will be a number of programs showing their stories.  This will make informative programs to have less priority. The good program will be cut or will be shortened its airtime.  Most of programs in media will be more focused on entertainment purpose instead of knowledge purpose.  Media will provide less contribution to our social as well.

    Lastly, paying much attention of media to personal lives will lead a social problem.  The programs will make people to pay more attention to their idol's lives.  There will be negative social value created to, especially, young age. Young people are the age which is easier to be appealed to this.  They will consume their time for following up about their idol's story instead of doing good things such as studying or playing sports.  When they grow up, our social will have more and more low quality adult member who loves following their idols instead of the one who has potential to develop our social including the country.

    In conclusion, I strongly believe that media should not pay too much attention to the famous people's lives.  This issue will lead to uncomfortable living of those people, affect to informative program, and lead negative value to our social.  It will be better if media pay much attention to the things that provide contributions to our social.

    แก้ไขเมื่อ 16 ต.ค. 51 16:13:47

    จากคุณ : Ariete - [ 16 ต.ค. 51 16:12:59 ]

 
 


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