-There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, one of the sounds that almost all people hear everyday is music. There are many different genres of music and music is also used in many situations. Some people use music for relaxation but someone is serious with music because they use it for make money. So, music plays an important role in our everyday life.
From my opinion, the best advantage of music and also the reason that we need music is there are no communication tools better than music. For example, you can understand the emotion of the song, although you do not understand the meaning of that song, you are happy or sad when hear music despite understanding the language used in that music. When someone falls in love, sometimes, a piece of music played by guitar or violin is better than thousands of sweet words.
For the type of music, although the traditional music of a country should be preserved, in general, the international music is easily for listening for all nationalities and more important than the traditional music because of it is universal and modern. There are three or four genres of the international music such as pop, rock, jazz and hip-hop, and almost all people in all country usually listen to it. In addition, these types of music are also used in a soundtrack or in a game.
However, the traditional music has some advantages such as if somebody would like to learn about the basic traditional of some country, this type of music is very useful. So, we should preserve it.
In conclusion, music is an important part of every body life and, at present, the international music is more important and popular than the traditional music but we should take more activities to preserve the traditional music.
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