My First Writing
In my life, I prefer to read a book rather than writing. I realize that it is not easy to become a good author. The author has to do a lot of research, try to make it interesting, and spend a lot of time working in front of a computer. Writing is really important to everyone and I could not avoid it. The first writing, I wrote about my interesing story in a famous website “Hi5”. My friends could leave messages to my writing in the website. Some friends agreed with my ideas and encouraged me to keep writing more. I felt uncomfortable with the beginning of writing. When my work was done, I was really overwhelmed it as if I were flying in the clear blue sky. I became shocked suddenly, when I looked at the clock because I realized how much time I spent.
First, whenever I am happy and I wish to share my experience to my friends, I would like to write my story. The first time for writing, I wrote my impressive story into the website. I tried to record it by writing about how I felt , what was going on, and what I did. Moreover, when time passed by, I could read my exciting story and built up emotion as though I was back in that event. For example, my first writing about the day which I obtained my bachelor’s degree. I felt excited to dress graduation clothes. My body was full of energy. It was very important for me because I studied hard in my major. A lot of professors were proud of their disciple. I could not control myself and my tear came out automatically. Every body always smiled and was welcome with success. I wrote my first story into a website in order to share it with my friends. In addition, my friends could access to the website and leave messages or criticize my story.
Second, when I finished my first writing, I felt proud of myself; I could did it. Although it was not important to other people, I realized that this was one of my marvelous works because they could not feel as much emotion as I. In addition, I tried to take care of my work as much as I can. For example, when I wrote about commencement day, I printed my work out. I told myself good job. I could not believe it; I could write it. My heart beat so quickly. It had value in my mind very much. I tried to touch my paper softly in order that it would not have any damage because I spent a lot of time writing it. However, when the strong wind came, my paper was hit. I felt a bit frustrated as I would not like to see my paper plenty of scratch or dirty. I was really impressed because I have never written it before.
Last, my first writing took a lot of my time. Nevertheless, it was valuable to use time in this activity. In my opinion, it was very difficult for me to write my story in short time. I was not familiar with how to organize ideas, how to make it easy to understand and how to attract people. For example, I strive for writing my first story. Many ideas came out of my brain spontaneously. I had to arrange the ideas in order that readers would not be confused with my story. I also had to make it exciting. I had to sit in front of my pc with many hours and concentrated on the event I experienced with a lot of irritation voice from outside. Moreover, I suffered from exhausting body after I went to my graduation day. My brain was terrible and needed much more time to think about it.
In summary, it is terrific to have a story that I would like to recognize. I always have fun whenever I go back and read about my story. Every word I used and Every sentence I composed are my impressive memory and hardly forget it. The first writing may take too much time, but I enjoy writing it. I have many emotion for my first writing. I enjoy sharing my story to my friends and I am glad when it is done. I am really tired when I have to spend too much time finishing it.
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