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The generousness is one of thai people.
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Logically speaking, generousness can never be one person or even one of the people.
It's impressive of foreign people and
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Who is impressive? Look up esl dictionaries to learn how to use the word 'impressive'.
Thailand has been designation is"The land of smile"
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The verb form 'has been designation is' doesn't exist in the English language. You should study verbs and tenses.
You'll be surprised if I tell you that 'Thailand is the land of lies'.
To see why Thailand, in the eyes of foreigners, is the 'Land of Lies', click the link below:
http://topicstock.pantip.com/library/topicstock/2009/07/K8062037/K8062037.html
Villagers of Bangplee district has one thing
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You should study 'subject and verb agreement'.
...confirms that a generousness and kindly
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Here, you have a sentence fragment.
You should also look up esl dictionaries to learn how to use the word 'confirm'.
...is cultural heritage by older generation to next generation.
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So, what happens to be the cultural heritage, anyway?
That's the ประเพณีรับบัว ,(งงค่ะ จะมั่วเขียนว่า รับบัว tradition ด้วยค่ะ)
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You do มั่ว in every single line, as a matter of fact.
It's ancient tradition and organized in Bangplee
Samutprakarn (province) was long time ago in B.E. 2467
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Congratulations! You almost got one sentence correct. But can you tell me why you can either say 'It's ancient tradition...' or 'It's an ancient tradition...'?
By the way, you have another sentence fragment here.
To find out what sentence fragments are, click the link below:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm
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