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หัวข้อ A special place
The place I call my second home is my school, Satit Kastet. From my point of view, the school is well-organized; nothing seems to be out of its location. I like how green the whole school is; even the black fence is decorated with verdant bushes. There are a lot of trees shadowing on the paths, which makes the air very clement under the heat of the sun. Moreover, the buildings are high enough that I can go to the top floor and let the fresh wind blowing through my exhausted body to get rid of fatigue. Damp soccer fields always give off the sweet smell of grass in the morning of the day. While walking from one place to another, I can smell soft fragrances of various types of flowers and suddenly feel relaxed. I may not like the noise of children fighting, but when they reconcile, it becomes one of the most pleasant sounds I have ever heard. In a classroom, although most of objects are hard and strong such as heavy wooden chairs, students usually find the way to break them without warning. We have same food for lunch in a canteen, the food tastes good, and the canteen is quite comfortable. Every good and bad thing that happens here, makes Satit Kaset is not only a place to learn about texts but also a place to learn about life.
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