ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 I would like to learn at ABC because ABC is famous institute. In my opinion, nowadays energy is essential for existence of humans. Thus I am interested in education of energy. Try it this way: I am of the opinion that energy is essential to the existence of mankind and it should be treated as one of the most important issues facing the world today. Energy studies should therefore enhance my future career and better my role in society. I should like to study at ABC because it is a famous institute. ................................................................ I would like to gain a schoarship due to I desire to lighten my family load. My friends which are graduate with bachelor can work to support expenses of my family but I decide to study the master degree consequently I don't have salary to support my family and thereby I don' want to annoy my family. Try it this way: I intend to win a scholarship to reduce the financial burden on my family. .... Hey, I'm stuck here.  I don't understand the next sentence. Why should your friends meet the expenses of your family? แก้ไขเมื่อ 27 ม.ค. 53 13:10:12 แก้ไขเมื่อ 27 ม.ค. 53 13:03:58 จากคุณ : fortuneteller เขียนเมื่อ : 27 ม.ค. 53 12:28:51