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This paper explains the role of the Internet as a tool of the social empowerment of democratic society. It can be use to empower, gain potential and abilities for the people and enabling citizen awareness to participate in setting up the direction and public policy in social, economic, political and cultural.
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In the second sentence, the word "It" refers to "This paper".
...can be use... (unnatural verb form)
to empower ............and enabling (goodbye to parallelism)
...empower...(this verb requires an object)
...policy in social, economic, political and cultural... (Should be policy on something; you also want at least one noun.)
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By using Internet network as tool for participation or collaboration such as website, social networking, e-Mail, Web board, Blog, Vote system.
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It is not a sentence.
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At the same time, state must be expanded telecommunication infrastructure for high-speed Internet connection to people in all areas of the country, with reasonable service charges.
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Why do you want to expand the state?
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And state must promote people at all levels of society should be use Internet in an ethical and considerate manner and information literate.
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must promote ............should be use (unnatural verb form)
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Sorry. I don't have time to discuss the validity (or invalidity) of your arguments.
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