เรียงความภาษาอังกฤษครับ ช่วยวิจารณ์หน่อยครับ
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เรียงความภาษาอังกฤษครับ ช่วยวิจารณ์หน่อยนะครับ เนื้อหา รูปแบบ หรืออะไรก้ได้ครับ ขอบคุณมากๆครับ
THINK OF A PERSON IN THIS WORLD WHOM YOU MOST LIKE OR DISLIKE. DESCRIBE THE TRAIT THAT MAKES YOU LIKE OR DISLIKE HIM OR HER AND FIND REASONS FOR THIS TRAIT. STATE BOTH THE TRAIT AND THE REASON FOR IT.
At present, humans have to earn their lives by each other like the tiger and the forest, the fish and the sea. When I want to eat, I have to go to market. One person can differently be influenced by another. For me, I am positively influenced by Charice, the popular singer for two reasons, that is, she has miraculous abilities and she is Asian and young like me.
Her marvelous abilities impress me when the first time I see her from youtube. She is a singer that has many abilities. Firstly, her voice is powerful and unique. For a long time, I have never been impressed in any voices. Moreover, she has an ability to entertain the people that see her. Her manner enhances me along her show. Many views that see her from her video on youtube can warrant her abilities.
Another reason is she is Asian and young like me. She shows the Asian have abilities like the white and the age is not the obstacles for every success. She inspire me to succeed my dream whatever the dream is.
We have our societies. Many people differently influence us by their way. Few people can make us remember for a long time. Charice makes me impressive by her abilities and her extreme success. In my opinion, she supports the saying, that is, nothing impossible.
คือ ผมจะเน้นเขียนpersonal essayอ่ะครับ ใครมีหัวข้อดีๆ หรือมีวิธีการเขียนช่วยบอกผมหน่อยนะครับ แล้วก็เขียนวิเคราะห์กราฟไรงี้ด้วยครับ ขอบคุณครับ หรือ แอดมาคุย หรือส่งเมลมาได้ที่momcharity@hotmail.com ขอบคุณครับ
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