รบกวนดูEssayหน่อยครับ ลองเขียนครั้งแรก
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คือว่าทดลองเขียนแบบจับเวลา40นาทีเป็นครั้งแรก(จบตามเวลาก็เลิกเลย) รบกวนช่วยดูหน่อยครับว่าเป็นยังไงบ้าง ทั้งเรื่องโครงสร้าง แล้วก็ความคิด
Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion?
It is obvious that the statement is too narrow and has a very strong sense of selfishness. The responsible to social is not only about money (refer to taxes) but also some mercy or sympathy which need to give directly to each others.
I can’t imagine that there are people who really believe in that way, tax is just the last thing that they can spend for public. How can they live a life? If one day they are walking on the street and accidentally meet an emergency case that they can give a hand. They may just scorn and say “be patient we have already paid a tax, the public service will come to get you soon”
Realistically, the cycle of money running in to the system of tax is take too long time to active back in the social. The outstanding example is an emergency case especially in case of disaster. In that chaos time, only help from the state is not enough, people need to share their humanitarian in the rough time. In my opinion, this is the one of social responsibility, to be helpful when someone need it.
In common life, to be kindhearted is also a key to make the harmony in the society. We give and take to the other, called sharing. The social get worse without sharing whether the revenue house is full of a bunch of money.
In conclusion, the way that social member will give to their social is to share their cordial giving not merely a revenue form.
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