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OK, I'm going to help you learn how to help yourself.
Manage all documents of procurement department.
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What do you mean by "managing all documents"? Do you write them, sign them, edit them or approve them?
Evaluation of all purchasing that ordering and bringing of products on time or late
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So, the purchasing can bring the products on time or late? I don't believe you.
worked as a central received about the problems of office equipment both the headquarters and all branches and coordinate for technicians to solve and maintain
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Worked as a "central"? When I don't work I am "the Center of the Universe".
Where is the "subject" of the verb "received"?
The word "about" is redundant.
Where are the "objects" of the verbs "to solve and maintain"?
worked as manage schedule for shipping employee of procurement department each day that sort by priority of the task
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You are a human being, I believe. How on earth can you become "a manage (or rather) a management schedule"?
Provide and procure supplier for invoice of construction equipment, office decorate equipment such as gardening, tile and etc. Then compare price and collage all document of price sent to superior for present to Executives
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You "don't procure products or services", but you "procure supplier for invoice"...Fantastic!
Provide price ,brand and type according define of sale and bidding (price after profit according define of company) to sales by e-mail
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"define of sale" and "define of company"?...incredible!
Purchasing order and bring product into stock within define of period
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"define of period" sounds unnatural.
Coordinate to store and marketing of Stock
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Something's missing and Lack of parallelism!
Negotiation with supplier about require of credit
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Incorrect part of speech!
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