ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 #1 His eyes looking back and forth between the instructor and the whiteboard, ears listening to the lecture carefully even the smallest details cannot escape his hearing range, and hand taking down notes, or maybe adding his own thoughts next to them, are some of the actions that can illustrate how this type of student is. Eyes + ears + hand are some of the actions. Grammar form is OK, but the meaning is not. If you want to describe the subject's action, you need to put the actions as subjects not body parts. Here is my adapted version. Looking back and forth between the instructor and the whiteboard, listening to the lecture carefully even the smallest details cannot escape the hearing range, and taking down notes, or maybe adding thoughts next to them, are some of the actions that tell what type of student he is. #2 He usually writes down the whole lecture he hears, and maybe draws pictures or notes irrelevant words near it too; therefore, his quality of work is not as high as the front-rower’s but rather fair to good, or even great. Grammar is OK, but again meaning is not. Take out "or even great." #3 This considered model student is a friend in need when it comes to education indeed. Again grammar form is OK, but the expression is awkward. This model student is considered a good friend by other students who often get tutoring help. จากคุณ : K.Senior เขียนเมื่อ : 22 ก.ค. 54 22:39:48