ช่วยตรวจทาน ESSAY ให้หน่อยนะคะ
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ช่วยตรวจทาน essay ให้หน่อยนะคะ พอดีว่าต้องส่งอาจารย์ค่ะ แต่หนูอ่อนภาษาอังกฤษมาก ต้องเน้นเรื่องศัพท์ ไวยกรณ์ และคำเชื่อม แต่รู้สึกว่าจะยังไม่เป็นแบบที่ใจหวังน่ะค่ะ ยังไงช่วยตรวจทานและแนะนำด้วยนะคะ ยินดีรับฟังคำด่าทุกประโยคค่ะ
Fifth Requisite ; Evolution of Human
Nowadays, nobody may not reject that the other important of the life and necessary are cell phones or mobile phone. The most of people always carry them to anywhere, because they are not just a communication device which only for calling, but they are high technology device now, they can transfer (send and receive flies) some kind of data such as mp.3, mp.4 file or documentaries files. Moreover they connection internet with Wifi sign and The Third Generation of Mobile Telephone (3g), just only one click, its easy and quick to sign in the social network.
Motorola Dyna Tac 8000X is the first cell phone of the world. It began at 1983, only can calling and cannot send or receive massage. They shape like a cylinder and big, so users call it a canteen often. They are so bulky and very unfashionable when we compare between the past and the present.
After that, many brands was happened and grow up such as Nokia, Samsung, Ericsson (now Ericsson was toke over by Sony Corporation and change the name to SonyEricsson) and a lot of brands was sprang up so fast. They include more tactics for cell phones from transferring message, emoticon message (this is the cause for Pagers extinction), alarm clock, radio, organizer and can make ringtone bye own. Later cell phones can take a photograph and video (from normal to full high definition). They have internal memory and a card slot for input a memory card. The user can transfer some data or files entertain from one device to the one by a Bluetooth, beside you can listen to music or watch some video files.
At the present time, many groups begin create their high technology products class, whether it is Nokia, SonyEricsson, Samsung, HCT and etc. Never to be forget for two new are highly popular groups which rush inorder to be number one and two, they are iPhone of the Apple Company, nationality of United State and Blackberry (grow up from Pager) of the Research in Motion (RIM), nationality of Canada. These cell phones can use 3g hi-speed internet or wifi, adds social networking program for help user convenience, application support, and some groups such as Blackberry, they make the prominence from Pager that is the users can chat between same advice and now many teenagers get ill the Lock Finger cause overchat, they call BB Lock. And then all of high technology phone we call Smartphone.
A part to help Smartphone get popular to Fifth Requisites of our life that is promotions of internet package that hot competition on price and worthiness of big three company. In Thailand they are DTAC, Truemove and AIS, include the other company who build and service about applications.
About thirty years ago, ten year later is true growing up from old cell phones can only calling but now they have more functions not deference to small computer. They not just a cell phone but they are favorite fashion and handheld computer. That show us for the continuous development and never stop, so we shall never catch them up.
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