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For คุณ let it be
I will go to audition to Academy fantasia, the most popular singing contest and also reality.
-->> I will be auditioning for Academy Fantasia, the ... and reality show.
// 'reality' is an adjective and requires a noun to follow. I understand that here in Thailand we use just the adjective as a noun a lot, as in 'car shows pretties', but that does not work if you're using the word in English. Something to be careful of.
Hopefully, I will be the last 12 person who are contestant. In fact, this reality call 'dream hunter' instead of contestant.
--> Hopefully I will make it to the final 12 contestants. In fact, for this reality [show], we should be called 'dream hunters' instead of contestants.
// Can you spot what you missed?
By the way, talking about my work, A cashier has to have much responsibility.
-->> a cashier has much responsibilities.
-->> a cashier must be highly responsible.
Hence, I have to get and change money to customers carefully.
-->> I have to receive and change money to customers very carefully.
Someday, I make a money short.
-->> On some days, the money count went short.
// 'Someday' means 'sometime in the future'. For instance, "Someday, I will be a big star!". I understand what you wanted to say, so you should break the words to get the correct meaning.
I have to retake them the the company.
-->> I had to repay the company.
The reason why I make it short is that I lose my mind while working. I think about other things while changing the money to costumers.
-->> The reason why it went short was because I lost my mind while working. I thought about other things while changing the money to costumers.
// Tense issue. It already happened. (And it shouldn't happen again ...)
For instance, I change bank 1000 instead of bank 100,
-->> I changed a 1000-baht note instead of a 100-baht note.
// Just proper word use.
and today, I make money short again.
-->> And, today, the money count went short again.
I want to get more money than this, but it's only a dream.
-->> I want to make more money, but it's only a dream.
Say to myself "Let it be". Though I lost some money, I don't lose my life. Keep walking, and tomorrow will be better
-->> So, I say to myself "Let it be". Though I lost some money, I don't lose my life. Keep walking, and tomorrow will be better.
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Your language is not bad, really. Some minor errors here and there.
If you're serious about plastic surgery, let me know. My cousin used to be a plastic surgeon and my customer knows a lot of surgeons too.
How about singing "Let it Be" at your audition! It's one of my favorite tunes to play the piano and sing along with. Need training? I can help. I contested in the Thailand Popular Song Festival way back in the 80's. It was a song writing contest, though.
Good luck with your audition!
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The word "unemployed" to me sounds like you have an ability to work but no one hires you. I guess you've just finished your study and you've never worked before. Let's wait for other suggestions for more proper word 
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