ช่วยแก้ไข ภาษาอังกฤษที่ผมเขียนด้วยครับ
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ช่วยผมด้วยนะครับ ผมมั่วเยอะมากTT ถ้าอะไรไม่เหมาะสมตรงไหนก็เปลี่ยนได้เลยครับ ต้องส่งการบ้านวันนี้แล้ว เขียนแบบแถมากๆ TT
The thing that Mrs. Mallards wants the most is freedom. Its not the strange thing. All the people need their freedom or the right to do something which they deserve to do. Now a day, we can see the problems in most of the undeveloped countries which have no freedom. Many conflicts have a cause from the people who want it and try to call for it, but no one listens to them. For example, the conflict between the people and the dictating government in the middle east countries like Egypt, Syria or Yemen. Moreover, its not only about freedom but Mrs. Mallards is also young. So, she still has many things in her life which she wants to do more than lives with her husband. If you had to live alone at home everyday and waited for your wife or your husband coming home, maybe your life will be boring and has no color. In my view, her husband is also the part of this problem. If he spent more time with her, took care of her, this story would never end like this. She may be delightful and embrace her husband with love when she meets him again. Maybe she will feel that her life has everything, she doesnt want anything more except her husband. This story teaches me that as human beings we all want to be happy and free.
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TheLeo64 
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9 ส.ค. 55 09:14:32
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