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In my opinion , I think that companies which care about color has a good idea to support their advertisement because the report of researcher show that color can help people to remember anythings such as text , shape and so on. However ; Each company must chooses right color to use in the company. If companies select right color , company's advertisement will stimulate their sale because people can remember company's name and their product.
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In my opinion , I think that companies > In my opinion, companies (In my opinion และ I think that ไม่ต้องใช้ทั้งคู่เพราะความหมายคล้ายกัน)
opinion , > opinion, (คอมม่าต้องติดกับคำ)
companies which care about color has > companies which care about color have (verb agreement)
companies which care > companies that care (ปกติจะใช้ which ใน non-restrictive clauses และ that ใน restrictive clauses)
advertisement > advertisements
the report of researcher show > research reports show (นิยมใช้มากกว่า)
anythings > things
text , > text, (คอมม่าต้องติดกับคำ)
However ; Each > However, each
must chooses right color > must choose the right color
If companies select right color , > If a company selects the right color,
company's advertisement > the company's advertisements หรือ its advertisements
stimulate their sale > stimulate their sales หรือ stimulate sales (ละไว้ their ก็ได้)
remember company's name and their product > remember the company's name and product
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