ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 Time had gone by, that area was covered by the unnatural growing trees, until it was hidden in the middle of the forest. And no one supposed to find it. Two thousand years have gone by, it’s now the year 4007. All the civilization was built up again just like before the Malini Island crisis. The Malini Island was still there and it was one of the biggest countries in the world. The story of the mysterious cave in the middle of the island became only a myth that has been told from generations to generations. Until, one day the researchers from Thajaplan Cooperation found it in the middle of Malini Island. According to the myth, who ever went in could never came back. Pali and Ami didn’t believe such a story, so they went in and never came out .. Poor Loki and Rika had lost their parents from such accident. The Thajaplan Cooperation kept that it as a secret. They lied every one that, Pali and Ami died in a car accident. On the next day, Loki and Rika would be picked up by their relatives. The children couldn’t believe that their mom and dad were gone. That night, Rika woke up by the sound of the thunderstorm, and she found out that Loki was gone. She heard the strange noise and she followed it without knowing where it was leading her to. She went into the deep forest with fear until she reached the myth area. Where every one called it “ Niyota”. The 2000 years old trees were no less than 1000 ft high and they all clustered like they didn’t want any one to go in. And no one ever did But the trees opened up and showed Rika the way. She squeezed in and visualized a small cave in front of her. In front of the cave, was Loki kneeling on the ground. She was praying in an unknown language, and all of a sudden, the thunder hit on her! Rika screamed and ran to her younger sister, and saw Loki with jaws, with one eye red and on eye green. She screamed and fainted. The next morning, Rika slowly got up and she turned side and saw Loki. She screamed with fear. But, Loki explained to her that it was all such a bad dream and from there the two children went to live with their poor relatives. Ten years had gone by, Loki was 18 and Rika was 20. After the children went to live with their relatives, strangely they got richer and richer, plus Loki became a popular model when she was only 15 and she was no more a shy person since that day. The day Rika had her worst nightmare. จากคุณ : max - [ 24 ธ.ค. 46 15:31:39 A:203.107.149.195 X: ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 2 Loki took care of Rika who wasn’t very well being. She was had asthma. They both shared every thing, but only one thing Loki ordered it to be untouched. The big black box she put under their bed. She locked it and she always kept the key. One day, Loki came back and she looked so pale after opening that black box. She was sick for days, but she wouldn’t tell Rika what that box had to do with her illness. One day, while Loki was taking a shower, Rika stole the key and opened the box with curiosity. The black smoke came out from the box and covered the whole area followed by the thunderstorm. She ran into the bathroom to see Loki, but she was burning by the blue fire! “ Why Rika!? I take care of you. I give you every thing you ever want. The only thing I ask from you is not to open that box. But you did .You opened it! Why!?” Suddenly, the whole place blew up, Loki pushed Rika out of the window. She fell and saw the whole place burned! Another four years have gone by, Rika graduated. No one came  to congratulate her. Since, she lived all alone by the money her relatives and Loki left . She told her friends about what happened to the house and Rika when she opened that box. But, no one believed her. She went back to Malini Island for a vacationb with her friends although she didn’t want to. At night, she prayed for Loki to come back, she missed her so much.  Suddenly, she saw a shadow moving outside the tent. She went out to check, and there she saw what she wouldn’t expect to see. It ‘s impossible .It was Loki who stood there smiling at her. “ I came back ..” Every thing around her whirled around and slowly she fainted. จากคุณ : max - [ 24 ธ.ค. 46 15:32:21 A:203.107.149.195 X: ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 3 The next morning, she woke up sweating. It was all only a dream .She went outside to eat break fast with every one and the long hair girl was sitting across of her. There were 5 people on this trip, but now there were 6! Loki asked her friend who was that, and all of them burst out laughing.   “ Rika, can’t you remember me? Can’t you remember your own sister? It is such a nice hurting joke.” She slowly headed up, and Rika couldn’t believe it, it was Loki! She really came back! She told every one the fact that Loki and her relatives died in fire 4 years. But, now every one just said it was crap! “ Rika, it’s all only a long night mare. Just forget it.” Loki said that again. Rika tried to convince herself to believe that. Loki told her every thing, that their parents died and they were adopted by the Cooperation. When Loki was 15, she became a famous model, so they were able to raise themselves, so they came out from the cooperation. Rika was about to believe all that. Every thing went back to normal. But, that night, when Rika looked under the bed, she found that black box! She knew she couldn’t believe Loki anymore. That night when she saw Loki turned into a demon at the Niyota was real! And when she opened the black box, Loki and the whole place was burned by the blue fire was also real! จากคุณ : max - [ 24 ธ.ค. 46 15:33:08 A:203.107.149.195 X: ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 4 Rika took the key box and ran in the middle of the storm. It was like a sign to forbid her not to go back there to the Niyota. But nothing could stop her now even the angry shouting voice of Loki. She ran as fast as she could and into the deepest zone of the jungle. The ancient tall trees she saw 14 years ago. The trees opened themselves once more, before Loki extended her arms to reach Rika, she ran into the cave She ran into Niyota Cave which no one could ever came back ..would she? จากคุณ : max - [ 24 ธ.ค. 46 15:33:36 A:203.107.149.195 X: ]

ความคิดเห็นที่ 5 จะอึ๋ย.. เด๋วมาใหม่นะคะ ตอนนี้ตาลาย ขอพักๆ จากคุณ : ++พายุทราย++ - [ 24 ธ.ค. 46 15:48:36 ]